There has been long ongoing debate at what should be the appropriate age for retirement and should it be same for all occupations. While some people think 65 years is right age for people to retire, others think that they should retire much early. Not all five fingers are of the same length and I think not everybody can be seen through same set of glasses, the retirement age should be based as per professions.
Firstly the professions requiring high experience that of Doctors, Lawyers, Teachers, Professors etc. gets richer with increasing age. Older Doctors, Lawyers are in high demand as compared to younger crowds so by compulsorily retiring them early it would be unfair to them as well as will not benefit the society.
There is another class for Engineers, Research Scientists who work on latest technologies & trends. For them the retiring age does not matter as they always have to upkeep with latest technologies.
Lastly their comes another genre of hard working class like Soldiers, Sailors, Pilots etc. who are constantly under stress, travel and hardly experience good married, settled life. Entire life they are travelling to some corner in the world, working very hard, under immense pressure. I think these are the people that have earned the right to retire at early age and enjoy pension and other benefits of retiring for all their hard work.
To conclude, I think there should be guidelines for the right retirement ages for each occupations, however, it is their personal choice that matters the most.
- Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:- offer to find somewhere to stay- give advice about what to do- give information about what clothes to bringWrite at least 150 words. 78
- It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical educationand sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think? 73
- You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter,Describe the itemExplain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take. 73
- You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take 73
- Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of work 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ot matter as they always have to upkeep with latest technologies. Lastly their comes ano...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0431372549 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53370829702 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3208194993 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309315519298 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11391892415 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979051015323 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164285507562 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589052308558 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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