It is generally preferred to study abroad because of various reason. Personally, I have never been to abroad for my education or any other purposes but, I believe that there are pros and cons on planning to study abroad. I hold this position since abroad study would help anyone to become independent; more confident and laborious. As a result, they will get opportunity to sharpen their mind in multi-discipline.
On talking about the negative aspect to plan for the abroad study, it is found that anyone need to get away from their family, friends and place. This will ultimately lead them towards frustration at beginning to cope at a new place; they may have to face cultural-shock; may not get used to with the new environment or many possibilities. In spite of these negative aspects, it is a great opportunity to deal with these things and make oneself stronger. If anyone has low immune to deal with challenges, they may dislike the experiences that they get during their stay at abroad. So, for them I would suggest to make them prepared at first before planning to go abroad.
Furthermore, for the people like me from the underdeveloped country it is great opportunity to go abroad for study because we do not have good education system here. Personally, I would like to go abroad for my higher education; grab the every opportunity; make myself more stronger in any aspect that I have to face. I believe the more predicament I have to deal, the more stronger I become. For instance, I remember the day when I left my village and moved to city area within my country. At the very beginning, life became so challenging that I have face with so many things. But later on, those challenging experiencing were my learning. As a result, I feel stronger these days.
If anyone has to plan for the higher education out of their country, I would suggest them to be make up their mind for every positive and negative aspect they may have to face in those situation. I would like to take this neutral position because I have a experience of getting away from my family. Although it was inside my own country, I got chances to face more challenges. So, I suggest anyone to make their mind before planning to go abroad for higher study. As a result, they will not be shaken by possible quagmire they have face in their stay.
Finally, If I am planning to study abroad, I would like about this experience but I will always be aware of the possible challenges that may come during my stay in abroad.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO 31 Integrated Writing Task 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Describe an object that is very special in your life Explain why this object is important to you Include details and examples in your explanation 86
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they answer the specific problems presented in the reading passage 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...grab the every opportunity; make myself more stronger in any aspect that I have to face. I be...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...he more predicament I have to deal, the more stronger I become. For instance, I remember the ...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
... life became so challenging that I have face with so many things. But later on, thos...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
...egative aspect they may have to face in those situation. I would like to take this neutral posi...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ke this neutral position because I have a experience of getting away from my fami...
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Line 7, column 533, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...e shaken by possible quagmire they have face in their stay. Finally, If I am plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, for instance, i feel, talking about, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7201986254 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439189189189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6808258187 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140087483894 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494907015545 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508071330583 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112496170665 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606517009731 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.