Teachers salary should be based on the academic performance of the students
Teaching in the present era is considered to be a debatable topic and on which talking about the salary of the teachers adds up to the fire. Although the current situation of the annual income of the teaching sectors is considerably low. An appropriate salary needs to be conferred for keeping the moral of the teachers high. Coming back to the above-mentioned statement, some of the people might be in the favor of the making the income of teachers performance-dependent, while on the other hand, others would be in against of this ideaology. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with the statement of depending the salary of teachers on the academic capability of its students. The pros and cons of this opinion can be shown from the two stituations mentioned in the later text.
Assesing the capability of the teachers with the academic scores of its class has its positive and neagative sides. Lets take up a situation of a class consisting of a high-scholl students, if some of the students in the class outperforms in their tests on the medical ground or any other circumstances. This doesn't imply that their teachers hadn't put in his efforts to impart knowledge in them. Hence, judging the final academic or test socre and determining the performance of the class to detemine the salaries of teachers would be unfair to these teachers who had shown dedication towards their duties. This may cause their morale to go down.
However, there may exist a case wherein cunning teachers who proscastinate their duties are readily enjoying their paycheck without putting in a lot of effort. In that case, a stringent control over the performance of such teachers needs to isnpected before debiting the monthly salaray in their account.
All in all, the statement can be viewed as both with positivity and negativity and the situations provided in the text adavocates the scenario of the teachers presently teaching in the schools, colleges and universities. In my opinion, we shouldn't decide the income of the teachers on the basis of its student's class performance, though a proper system needs to be developed to check on the lethargic teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, while, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96944444444 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94339603977 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8061444236 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321334817136 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105002112963 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752061155361 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185681934974 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735375296603 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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