Nowadays people are working too hard What is the reason for that what should employers do in order to prevent employees from this

Long time working culture can be seen in many countries. In modern times majority of the people are working hard to fulfill their needs which also increase many health and social issues, even they hardly have a proper work-life balance. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this and the possible solutions to lesser the issues.

One the one hand, numerous research occurred to identify the trend of working culture. As we all know current job market is way more competed than past decades and many skilled workers are unable to join in a good job due to huge workforce. A recent research pictured that employees are working harder to secure their job and showing off their performance in front of their supervisors. Besides, an American researcher illustrate that more than 15% of employee work extra hour to support their family or led a luxury life which lessen the social bonding and raise health issues.

However, companies should have to take initiatives to get rid of from this situation and grow a friendly working environment. Job security is one of the most important factor which can be ensuring by making standard and clear policy. Contract base workers are great example to illustrate this issue, they are always having mental pressure to lose their job and often work harder to secure it. Also, following global standard working strategy can lessen the problem where employee assist their task in milestone basis with a specific time-frame which reduce their workload. Therefore, it is not only ensure an pleasant working environment but also enhance the productivity.

To conclude, though employee tend to work harder to show their performance and make their job secure yet employers have many resources and activity what make a better working environment including productivity.

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Average: 4.9 (7 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 277.0 1615.20841683 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 56.0 315.596192385 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.73556479973 4.20363070211 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10797501728 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 176.041082164 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.839285714286 0.561755894193 149% => OK
syllable_count: 85.5 506.74238477 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7805737134 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157505130645 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917401863642 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368072043147 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157505130645 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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