The flowchart illustrates the labeling process of shellfish and sending them to market all over the world. The process is initiated with the fishing stage, which is monitored automatically through a complex monitoring system from the center of Santiago. This means that all boats are connected to GPS systems and find their locations through satellite information.
After fishing, there are three main stages beginning with certifying catch by putting barcode labels. Followed by processing the product in factories. Finally, the processed products are exported to local and international markets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 512.0 965.302439024 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 89.0 196.424390244 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75280898876 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.07147865564 3.73543355544 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86082508406 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.775280898876 0.547539520022 142% => OK
syllable_count: 150.3 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8426428678 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138019392794 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685056524434 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569326200561 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10080390275 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00404102325687 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.06136585366 133% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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