Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
The choices we make today can profoundly affect our future. we often take decision precipitately without thinking about the consequences, this is where an experienced person can help in making the right choice. personally, I believe that one should always take suggestions from others. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, not all problems we face are unique, which means that someone had been in the similar situation in their life. Hence, someone can definitely guide us to tackle the situation efficiently. The student, being a novice always struggles in making decision about his life, this is where elders can help the student to make the right choice. For instance, recently, I was confronted with a dilemma of making the choice between giving time to studies or to my girlfriend. I ruminated a lot but could not make a solid decision. As a result, I shared my issue with my father who gave me the most intelligent advice, which made me maintain a good relationship as well as good grades. If I would have not asked my father about the solution , then I would have severely lost in one case.
Secondly, most of the times by taking suggestions from our seniors we can learn the tactics they have applied in their life, which will make our problems easier to resolve. being our senior they must have discovered some efficient methods of dealing with mishaps in life,like by what attitude we should face life, how to deal the workload etc., utilising the strategies taught by seniors we can make our lives manageable and easier to live. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, when I was newly recruited to the company, I was able to make good connections with my seniors. As a result, I get to know many important details to excel in the company like how to impress my boss, how to handle the work he give etc. The tactics which my seniors taught till today is very helpful to me while working. Therefore, I believe asking from seniors for help can make it resolve easily.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that one should not solve his problems alone. this is because others can always give the best advice to come out of problems and because sometimes seniors can teach you strategies to solve the problem more efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7698019802 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5772195602 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.678235264 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.35 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273296601357 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860999026918 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684471846401 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167140810073 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622800784752 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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