Many young people leaving school think that going to university will give them higher wages, superior career prospects and greater job satisfaction. However, they would do better to get a job and start earning as soon as possible.
In recent years, many young people are struck by an idea that they are tempted to leave their school and enter the university in order to get more job opportunities and perspectives in the future. Some believe that it is an appropriate way to earn much money with a prestigious work so that they intend to get a great job as soon as possible. However, I do disagree with this statement and in this essay, I am going to clarify my ideas and give reasons to help my clues.
First of all, young generation tend to progress all the time in order to obtain their suitable position in the society. However, this hurry may destroy young people’s hopes and their dreams can come to naught. I mean that school life give many opportunities to form as a mature person and to adopt a new life which you will have some problems about your family, financial difficulties and so on. In this case, they should finish their school in order to complete your fundamental awareness for their study and life and it would be easy to enter the prestigious university and get a professional qualification which will help them to make a successful career in the future.
The universities play a significant role students’ life and if students finish any university, they can make a career easily. Now, most companies send their representative to universities for finding literate students, so they take on such students after finishing university. For instance, in Azerbaijan BP, SOCAR and other famous companies visit some universities such as Caucasian, Baku Higher Oil School and choose a couple of students for taking on. Thus, such students have more prospects for building career, getting high-paying job. Also, students should have university degree for working at state bodies.
To sum up, in my view,it is significant to finish school in order to be succesfull in your life.
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However, I do disagree with this statement
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young generation tend to progress
young generations tend to progress
I mean that school life give many opportunities
I mean that school life gives many opportunities
they should finish their school in order to complete your fundamental awareness for their study ...
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Sentence: To sum up, in my view,it is significant to finish school in order to be succesfull in your life.
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