Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory school programme (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Free-willed community service such as charity, community development and sports education is believed by some people to be made compulsory for secondary school students. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.
It is often argued that honorary community service be made compulsory for high school students, people who believes this claim it helps to prepare them for the future by way of grooming them for community development either by representing the community in sports, helping the needy or providing social amenities in their little way. For instance, a passing out youth corper provided foot-wears for about 500 pupils of the community she served as a way of contribution. This is because of the compulsion of the free-willed community service she has enjoyed right from her high school.
However, I tend to disagree and there are compelling reasons for this. Firstly, it seems to me that this might be expensive for parents to afford. This is because there will always be a practical aspect of it in school which will require funding, coupled with academic expenses. As an illustration, students that participate in charity work will in school often opt out because of the expenses and unwillingness. Also, it appears to be stressful for the students. Having to join this with academic work and house chores after school put much workloads on them, then depriving them of their relaxation time.
In conclusion, community development service should not be made compulsory because it requires much in terms of finance and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... work and house chores after school put much workloads on them, then depriving them...
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Line 9, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hores after school put much workloads on them, then depriving them of their relax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8578328567 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.042748138 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306349786922 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120177215985 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866748397907 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213749413377 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795454690716 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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