Some people think that private health care is better for people Other say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government How far do you agree or disagree with the given statement

health care to its civilian.
health care to its civilians.

whether private health care better
whether private health care is better

In the private health care expert doctors and nurses
In the private health care there are expert doctors and nurses

Consequently people can easily relief from diseases.
Consequently people can easily relieve from diseases.

private health care offer benefits in long run
private health care offers benefits in long run

people can treatment through
people can get treatments through

because government allocate funds
because governments allocate funds

Sentence: People from broken families and under privileged people get profit from public health care because they provide their services either free or cost of take nominal charges.
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No. of Words: 416 350
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Few individual,think that private sectors is good.Whereas,Other's vocalizes that the government of the country should take the responsibilities in providing free health services for the its people.If so,will there be quality and standard health care services provided to every individual? However I strongly feel that both the government and the private health sectors should work hand in hand for the people
Firstly,to discuss about the government services towards health care,I believe that there would be a gap in the quality care ,although it is easily accessible and feeable,Inspite of its highly beneficial scheme to the affordable people in the country.I often analyse that the government in my country should improve in its standard in providing health services though the availibilties of primary health sectors in every area of the state.
In contrast,Private sectors are way to developed in its technologies and standard,knowing the fact that they are much more expensive when compared to the government services.To illustrate about their well trained professional which brings in much belief in the mind of an individual.If the private sectors do not provide health service in collaborating with the government there would difficulities in the nation likewise epidemics and unemployment
In conclusion, The government should provide free service with high quality and standard likewise private sectors should play an vital role in filling the gaps in the healthcare where the government are unable to reach