You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter, explain
• Why you have changed the job
• Describe your new job
• Tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have switched my career.
You know the web development company in which I worked before is far away from my living place. I had to travel by bus for nearly three hours every day and the pay was also not good enough. I became weak due to the long journey. So, I decided to submit my resume in some job searching sites and received an interview call from a multinational Consultancy Services.
At Present, I am working as a Programmer in this new organization where I have found new friends and the work conditions are fantastic. In comparison with the previous company here, I am getting much better salary. Thank god! I have got relief from long traveling.
In the next month, we are going to have a reunion party with our ex-university students. After a long 5 years, some known are coming to join us! That’s really an exciting news dear friend. Without you, we will not be able to enjoy the party heartily. hope to see you soon!
Best regards,
Adam
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- Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples 56
- Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren t necessary Do you agree or disagree with it Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience 11
- SCHOOL AND UNIVERSITIES STUDENTS LEARN LESSON FAR BETTER FROM THEIR TEACHERS THAN FROM OTHER SOURCES, SUCH AS THE INTERNET AND T.V. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...d the work conditions are fantastic. In comparison with the previous company here, I am ge...
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Line 11, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ot be able to enjoy the party heartily. hope to see you soon! Best regards, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.546875 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55391091025 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682291666667 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5510293908 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214215643034 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063240448815 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563973000141 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128049474004 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474215183318 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.