Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
I agree with the authors statement that science and technology might be able to solve the problems of society one day in future. Because the contribution that science had given to society by analysing the problem is magnanimous . There are two examples that are descibed in ordered to support my view .
The science and technology has impacted lots of advantages to human life . The life of human has become simpler and easier.The problems of a society are solved by introducing the innovative solutions by deep rectification in science . For instance, the people feel frusrated by the Bank's boring transaction procedure . One has to wait in queue for transactional operations such as withdraw ,deposit or money transfer . The folk from the far place area feels difficult to travel to the authorized bank and follow the procedure of transaction . The science has come up with an eassy solution to this problem by creating online money transfer application . One can do all transactional operations in the applications such as Phone pay and Google Pay . Thus, Science has a tremendous benifits on the problem of folk .
The another reason of my view is that science had given an prodigious confidence to the people espessially physically handicapped people . The handicaped are the one who lacks certain organs and defieciency in life. Blind ,deaf,dumb many in the society thinks that they are done in life. They cannot achieve anything in life and cannot reach the success path but due to science and technology it has become possible for handicapped to feel the life and achieve their ambition . For instance, Deaf are able to listen to sounds by undergoing an advanced treatment to their eardrums . Blind could see the nature by undergoing the surgeries .Thus, The impossible things have become possible by the science .
On the one hand science and technology would solve all of society’s problems but on the other hand, Certain problems pertaining to human activities and his emotions could never be solved by science in life . A robot could be made in order to do work by implementing robotics but it cannot give birth to child and many other violations that it unfollows.
In sum, Though the problems in life are complex .science has an solution and plan for everything . The difficulties that arives in life could be solved certain techinques by technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10025706941 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88142964397 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47557840617 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5270173483 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4761904762 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172661947508 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562158380566 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665703733767 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120603342779 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516607651993 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.