The provide map illustrate considerable changes of the Islip will modernization in the future in comparison with the present of it's agricultural city.
Overall, the modification have brought with them the amelioration of transports and urbanized while harly have there been any significant shift in the education of children whole town.
It is noticeable accommodation , the main road will relocated by the pedestrians only which is between the north and souther in town, moreover the Dual carriageway that will coved whole town creating a cricle. The situation in north of map, countryside will have been replaced by bus station, shopping centre and car park.
Futher the down souther,An upsurge in the number of detached houses has been witness while the school and park are going to remain as their are.Exspcially, the size of park is reduce to a half with the size in the now.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Huda Atta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The provide map illustrate considerable ...
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The provide map illustrate considerable changes of ...
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... the present of its agricultural city. Overall, the modification have brought w...
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... the education of children whole town. It is noticeable accommodation , the mai...
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...own. It is noticeable accommodation , the main road will relocated by the ped...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
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Suggestion: relocate
...able accommodation , the main road will relocated by the pedestrians only which is betwee...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tation, shopping centre and car park. Futher the down souther,An upsurge in th...
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...nd car park. Futher the down souther,An upsurge in the number of detached house...
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...s been witness while the school and park are going to remain as their are.Exspcia...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
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...school and park are going to remain as their are.Exspcially, the size of park is red...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Exspcially
... park are going to remain as their are.Exspcially, the size of park is reduce to a half w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08965517241 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9516336349 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4126883123 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.6 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0392026124314 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255011255305 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312406689148 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024491690506 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026320083912 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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