Replaced Things That Use to Be Done in Home by Hand with Machines
Nowadays, many things that used to be done in the home by hand before are subtitute by machines. In this essay 1 totally disagree with that because it has more disadvantages than the advantage for some reasons.
It is important not to replace all things can be handled by hand with machines which causes damaged for human especially for them who have no fulltime job. Because that can be closed the job opportunities and also bad for health because many people have more less exercise their body particulary their hands. For example, some womans can lost opportunities to work if all kitchen or household jobs replaced by machines. That things can be unfair for thousands of womans who need a job.
But on the other part, machines is the good ways increase productivities. Because there are many things which are doing by hand has more times than by machines. For instance in the jobs like cutting the grass have little time to be done comparison by hand. Therefore by machine many things can be done by less human effort just than by hand. There is no doubt that more things can be done effectively by machines than by hand.
I believe that use machines than hand it can be distract social value about giving chance for womans for doing something that usually they do by their hand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...bad for health because many people have more less exercise their body particulary their h...
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Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tle time to be done comparison by hand. Therefore by machine many things can be done by ...
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Line 9, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re by machine many things can be done by less human effort just than by hand. The...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74449339207 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46213341492 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52422907489 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.818915548 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411204936385 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177737881963 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125732710347 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265469129354 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801851331273 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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