The chart demonstrates the findings of a questionnaire between women and men in the last 300 years about the significant inventions.
As can be seen from the graph, the survey presents the attitudes of female and males about 7 inventions. Bicycle was the most caterorized as the most important invention by both genders. While TV represents the least used inventions. It is noticeable that as many females as males selected bicycle to be the most important invention over the last 300 years. Both male and female tended to see the importance of computer in the same level. However, males seemed to give more preference to car and internet. on the other hand, Women believe that mobile phone and radio were more important for them then men.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Thien
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...st important invention by both genders. While TV represents the least used inventions...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... were more important for them then men.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 602.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74730817903 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0046292328 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046233260686 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199710023101 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025929739333 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410746161169 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00800797683154 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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