Techno corporation is our top pick for the investment this term. We urge all our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed a stellite technology has been approvd by the FTA to compete with current satellite provider. The company is techno corporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of the respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not monopoly.Thus , the new venture of technocorporation into satellite televsion will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.
The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. Primarily, the argument is based on several unwarranted assumption such as the setellite techonology that has been approved by fta is best and also it assumes that the survey regarding setellite television provider is reliable, rendering its conclusion, that the new venture of tecno corporation into setellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now, invalid.
The argument fails to provide any justification that the setellite techonology devloped by techno corporation will be better than the existing technologies. argument has provided information that the new setellite technology that has been devloped by tecno corporation is approved by fta to compete with existing satellite providers but gives no further information about weather it is better than the current sattelite providers or not which very immportant to evaluate weather people will switch to it or not. the argument would be more convencing if it has provided more information regarding how good this new sattelite is. even then the argument had to further prove that their is no other new company will come with same level of satellite technology.
The argument also leaves many other unanswered questions.Even if the this new satellite techonology is best and also there is no other competing company likily to launch their satellite techonology in coming time, people are not neccesarry likely to switch to this new television satellite as it might be possible that this new technology is very expensive and the main prospect costumers are not able to afford this expensive technology.
finally, the data provided by the argument about theconsumer survey also lacks depth of detail that would helped us to evaluate the significance of study results. How many people were surveyed? what is the margin of error and how was the study conducted? is 80% statically significant? If the survey represented large enoungh survey group to extrapolate the general population, then the results may conveying something significant.
possible unintended consequences must be addressed before investing money in this company or people might lose their money.
Because the argument makes sevral unwarranted assumptions, it fails to make convencing case that the new venture of techno corporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 2021 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.347 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.865 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 73 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.373 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.768 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Argument
...better than the existing technologies. argument has provided information that the new s...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...eather people will switch to it or not. the argument would be more convencing if it...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... the argument had to further prove that their is no other new company will come with ...
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Line 5, column 760, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith same level of satellite technology. The argument also leaves many other unan...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
... leaves many other unanswered questions.Even if the this new satellite techonology i...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...many other unanswered questions.Even if the this new satellite techonology is best and a...
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Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is no other competing company likily to launch their satellite techonology in co...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...afford this expensive technology. finally, the data provided by the argument abou...
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Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: What
...results. How many people were surveyed? what is the margin of error and how was the ...
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Line 13, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Is
... error and how was the study conducted? is 80% statically significant? If the surv...
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Line 13, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts may conveying something significant. possible unintended consequences must be...
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Suggestion: Possible
...ay conveying something significant. possible unintended consequences must be address...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, regarding, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49602122016 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94786506873 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46949602122 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 128.217150784 57.8364921388 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.0 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 23.324526521 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184353877461 0.218282227539 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574463322355 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502468097143 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999175400164 0.128457276422 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474613931822 0.0628817314937 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.3799401198 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.3550499002 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 12.3882235529 129% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.