In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
It is indisputable that children’s safety is vital for society’s development. For this reason, a curfew, which forbids children to be out without adults at night time, was imposed in many areas of the United States. I believe it is a positive development as not only does it benefit children but also society.
One of the primary points to consider is that a curfew has a positive influence on children's security. This is because night time is known to be the main period of criminals, such as fraudsters or bandits, activity and a curfew protects children from meeting them. Moreover, this measure makes almost impossible for teenagers attending night clubs where drug dealers usually spread their pills and powder. Thus, by adhering to the rules, children appear to be under parental control all the night time that, ultimately, seems to prevent them from a harmful influence.
Another important argument is that the decision not to allow children walking outside without adults would seem to benefit society in the long run. In other words, the fewer children are undergone adverse influence, the healthier and more sustainable society they will constitute in the future. For example, youngsters who became addicted to narcotics appear not to be able to create strong relationships, families, and to give birth to healthy offspring. On the contrary, children who were brought up under the parental control are more likely to do that.
In conclusion, I reckon that imposing a curfew is a positive development which have a beneficial effect on both society and teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, thus, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22957198444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85470553107 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5026204155 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193462783965 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685011136684 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696812119697 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115392532878 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743762488993 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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