The table shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 and 2009.
The table illustrates how many cars were produced at 3 different countries, Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a period of 6 years starting from 2003.
In general, it can be seen that while the number of cars manufactured in Argentina increased, the opposite was true for Australia. Besides, the figure for Thailand was the highest during the period.
To begin with, starting from 735852 in 2003, the number of produced cars in Thailand climbed rapidly to reach the peak of 1162356 in 2005, but later dropped slightly to 999963 in 2009.
Moving on, with regard to the other 2 countries, 2009 witnessed a significant decline in the figure for Australia from 452163 to 245624 in 2009 and it became the smallest figure at the end of the period. By contrast, the figure for Argentina saw a reversed pattern in which it rose dramatically from 235088 in 2003 to 466089 in 2009.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, while, in general, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92052980132 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64673743869 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8358681143 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408296987431 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190657310321 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852181074502 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239678493857 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576042099735 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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