Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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...gral part of secondary education or not.That holds a vital decision.In my opinion,un...
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...tion or not.That holds a vital decision.In my opinion,unpaid community service mus...
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Suggestion: Because
...service must be enforced in high school.Because this will create a sense of responsibil...
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...will also learn to serve humanity. to begin with,social welfare at early age ...
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...milar chores help children to recognize one selves and likewise construct the path of huma...
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...imately results in their better careers.Therefore it goes without saying ,that early invo...
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...careers.Therefore it goes without saying ,that early involvement in volunteer work...
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...rofessional lives of future generations.For instance,Bill gates the founder of Micr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, likewise, second, so, therefore, while, even so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6652892562 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45005689257 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685950413223 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.769333769 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.2 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.4 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.6 7.06120827912 405% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213064314474 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100038435651 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562590352909 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119325564307 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432150770685 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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