People have different views about whether the criminals should be taken in jail for a long time or not. It seems to be a rather long-running and protracted controversy. In this essay, both views will be discussed followed by my opinion.
One of the main reasons for the offenders should be stayed in prison for a long time is that the most of convicts will break the law again after they are released from jail. Because they may learn the experience from other outlaws in the prison and become more dangerous to the society. In addition to that, increasing the punishment of the crime is a good way to deter the crimes. They may think twice about the seriousness of the problem before they commit the crimes. Furthermore, if the government does not give harsh punishments to the criminals, it may let them think little of laws.
Others that disagree the views, on the other hand, point out that there are other methods to reduce the crimes. They think that it is the government’s responsibility to teaching criminals professional skills in the jail. So they can find a job easily and have the abilities to support themselves after they return to society. Moreover, those criminals can do community service to learn how to help others, and they can also get respect from others. That is also a good way to reduce the crime rates.
In conclusion, both views have right. As far as I am concerned, I prefer that government should give harsh punishments, such as huge fines, limit their freedom and so on, to deter the criminals. Because they should be responsible for what they have done.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the convicts') or simply say ''most convicts''.
Suggestion: most of the convicts; most convicts
...d in prison for a long time is that the most of convicts will break the law again after they are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75899280576 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68314703057 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7022736496 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190381579161 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638196483464 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465334497272 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118050518279 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433036985613 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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