BAR GRAPH SHOWS PERCENTAGES OF HOUSEHOLD OWNED ACCOMMODATION AND PERCENTAGES OF HOUSEHOLD RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES, THROUGHOUT LAST CENTURY. IN GENERAL PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD RENTED DECREASED THROUGH THE 1981 TO 2011. ON THE OTHER HAND, PERCENTAGES OF HOUSEHOLD ACCOMMODATION INCREASE AT THE SAME TIME
ACCORDING TO THE GRAPH IN 1918 ABOUT 75 PERCENT PEOPLE RENTED THEIR ACCOMMODATION. IT’S THE HIGHEST RENTED PERCENTAGE THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN TIME DURATION. HOWEVER MINIMUM PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD ACCOMMODATION RENTED RECORDED IN 2001 AND IT WAS ABOUT 31 PERCENT. THE LOWEST PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD RENTED RECORDED IN SAME YEAR, IT WAS ABOUT 69 PERCENT IN 1939 AND 1953 THERE WERE NO ANY CHANGES ON BOTH OWNED AND RENTED HOUSEHOLD. HOWEVER, AFTER 1953 HOUSEHOLD OWNED IN ACCOMMODATION WAS INCREASED WITHOUT ANY INTERRUPTION UNTIL 2001. IN 1971 PEOPLE WHO ACCOMMODATION OWNED AND RENTED WERE SAME AMOUNT AND IT WAS 50 PERCENT EACH CATEGORY. BUT IN 2011 IT SEEMS LIKE TREND IS TURNED UPSIDE DOWN. IN 2011 HOUSEHOLD IN RENTED ACCOMMODATION INCREASED BY ABOUT 6 PERCENT THAN 2001
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... 69 PERCENT IN 1939 AND 1953 THERE WERE NO ANY CHANGES ON BOTH OWNED AND RENTED HO...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45614035088 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07383240851 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2363352009 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280884165241 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138859669539 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683954891942 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258126834156 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505471829365 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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