You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
-Ask them for helping finding accommodation
-tell them where you would like to live
-tell them the type o place you are looking for
Hello David!
I am writing to you with regard to my travel to Sydney.
First of all, I would like to ask how are you doing in Sydney? I know that Sydney is a hectic city, and if I good remember you prefer to live in smaller city.
However, I am going to move to Sydney in July, due to my internship. I would like to ask you for help to find accommodation. Therefore, I would like to find a share accommodation for instance, a single or double room with separate bathroom. The best location would be around Bondi Beach. Because I love to swim in the ocean. I hope living in share house will help me to find new friends.
Moreover, it would be grateful if the mentioned accommodation would be a house, due to my love to specific architecture of Sydney. In addition, please make sure that in the suggested place smoking is prohibited.
I humbly appreciate for your help.
I am looking forward to seeing you.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnship. I would like to ask you for help to find accommodation. Therefore, I woul...
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Line 13, column 326, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...ach. I hope living in share house will help me to find new friends there. Moreover, it would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, therefore, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66225165563 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70604162695 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0818328342 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367566988554 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146226393704 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116578457554 0.0603063233224 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198515447985 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093338365102 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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