You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time.However, you think it needs some improvements.Write a letter to the college magazine.In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved
Hi Sir or Madam
I'm a regular customer of college cafeteria. I'm writing a letter of request for you.
Although I always have lunch there and often have coffee with my friends, I think the cafeteria has some shortcomings that need to be addressed.I think the cafeteria has a relaxed and enjoyable environment and so I have chosen it for lunch and coffee.I have great memories and indescribable memories with my friends.In my opinion, one of the problems of the cafeteria is the poor design of the chairs, painting and lighting.To this list, of course, you can add dirty toilets.Although the dishes here are cooked with the best and freshest ingredients, but because the waiters work slowly, the food gets cold to the customer, and on busy days more customers leave the cafeteria without eating.
I make some suggestions for improving the cafeteria.irst, if the seats are slanted, the seats take up less space.Secondly, lighting and painting should be in harmony.And the last thing about food is that not only does the cafeteria not hurt but it can support more customers if the number of servants increases or they are trained to do their jobs quickly.
I hope to hear good news soon if possible.
Your sinerely
Daniali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, i think, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00961538462 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90758483216 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 246.650900397 44.8134815571 550% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.666666667 76.5299724578 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 16.8248392259 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 4.34317383033 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246360325544 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104929154032 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554189901945 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118840834873 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787155162344 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 8.37731958763 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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