The vast amount of time people devote in jobs leaving little time for personal life is a widespread problem and one that sparked heated debates. Many believe that this is a main cause of strain on relationships between friends and families. I believe that this shortage of personal time cause disputes in relationships especially with immediate family members. I will elaborate the problem along with their reasons throughout this essay.
The preponderant reason is the increase in unemployment rate and tough competition on jobs which make employees strive to increase output levels by working extra hours in the office. Employees feel obligated to put in extra long hours just to complete projects on time in order to meet their employer’s expectations or meet demands from customers. As a result, employees work longer hours, sacrificing their personal time and ignoring their personal lives. This in turn cause disputes among spouses, families and friends which might lead to losing these important relationships. For example, because of the immense pressure to quickly bring a product to market, employers will make the employees work on weekends and not providing for sufficient time to their families.
Secondly, increased standard of living, variations in lifestyles, project deadlines and competitive market can cause more stress for the employees. For instance, a recent study conducted by the University of California on software employees shows that out of 100 employees 88 people are suffering from stress management disorder. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of organizations and managers to provide space between personal lives and professional careers.
According to the arguments aforementioned, work life balance is essential for one to lead a life that is prosperous and contented. Further to this, policies that can help to achieve this balance should be made mandatory in organizations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53898305085 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05859656171 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6519550938 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333536710197 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109285219485 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135256194562 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188484840578 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159939914849 0.0609392437508 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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