Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Parents are the best teachers.” Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agree with This concept that parents are the best coach for their children .In my opinion being the best in this field is so crucial to both parents and children as whole.I feel this way for two reasons,which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with,parents are the first one who the children meet in their life especially mother that give birth after nine month.children obtain their first skills from parents,first foot,first talk and first points of view.they grow with this prospect and they only trust to parents. As a result, children imitate every behavior of their parents due to even newborn baby can detect their parents from strangers.This shows the importance of parents role in formation of identity’s child.For example, my little sister copies most of my mom’s action that can be surprising for us. She use the same words and pretend to do like a young woman.This example demonstrates how the parents affect child and teach them in best way.
Secondly, parents consider the situations then learn children according to their characteristics.This like a personal education and parents never teach their children negative things.They observed every reaction of babes and can modify them in the best way.My own experience shows this.When I was a child I got bad grade and I was afraid of my parents and hide mine from them,after a week they had come to my school and have realized every thing.Then my mom came and spoke with me and advise me that I never occult any thing of them.At the end it became a wonderful experience for me.
In other hand, I strongly disagree with statement that parents are not great teachers, due to they haven’t educated in all fields.They have valuable experience and most of the time experience is more important than educate.Parents can transport their feeling to child easily because children can trust them.
In conclusion, parents should be more thoughtful of acting in front of their child.because children are like parrot and record every movements.And this can be shape the future of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06086956522 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91517551224 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.157951201 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.428571429 100.406767564 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.2857142857 20.6045352989 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5714285714 5.45110844103 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117712704816 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646402974823 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044654505516 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695547885192 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051314061614 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 11.7677419355 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.1575268817 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.