The newsletter offers investors advice to invest in a new, FTA-approved, satellite television provider, Techcorporation. It emphasizes that the satellite television industry has been monopolized and the introduction of a new player, Techcorporation, will be highly profitable to those who invest in the new company. However, the extolment of Techcorporation in the newsletter features very little justification for investors. No significant evidence delineates the robustness of Techcorporation's technology, Techcorporation's ability to penetrate the already monopolized market, and the timeline Tec...
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Sentence: However, the extolment of Techcorporation in the newsletter features very little justification for investors.
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Sentence: However, if the research deems that hte technology is still flawed and needs significant modifications, then it hurts the case to invest now in Techcorporation.
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Sentence: Although the mentioned consumer survey indicates an incredibly high eighty percent respondent dissatisfaction, the pertinancy this survey has on Techcorporation is unclear.
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Sentence: Finally, the newsletter ends with a sense of urgency, advizing investors to act fast and 'invest now' in Techcorporation to maximize their profits.
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Sentence: More information should be provided on Techcorporations timeline, be it in a gant plot or simple milestones they aim to achieve.
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Sentence: On one hand, more information on Techcorporations technlogy and its ability to compete with the existing services dominating the market will help discern whether or not Techcorporation is a viable investment opportunity.
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Sentence: Techcorporation's market penetration should also be assessed to determine whether there really is room for it to take a significant chunk of the market away from the satellite tellevision service monopoly.
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