Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it?
In a modern world, among a number of issues for people to deal with, enjoying good health is one of them and along with it arises something even more specific which is physical health of people goes downhill even in developed countries. Within the scope of this writing, a number of reasons will be discussed and from then solutions will be proposed.
Nowadays, people have to face more difficult problems than before. First of all, one of the main causes of this matter is the bustle of people's business. This is clearly alarming since actual working time has been intensifying in years. Obviously, people are spending most of their time in the office, which blocks them from out of work activities such as physical exercises. In addition to that, the use of dietary supplement overstated by those companies makes the matter even worse. This needs to be seen as a concerned matter because people tend to believe that consumption of those things will keep them in the good health status without physical jerks. Last but not least, it is believed that the media and addiction to internet surfing are also responsible for falling of people's physical health. This is reasonable frightening due to the fact that people are willing to spend their whole weekend to stick their eyes in the TV programs and hand phone screen.
As a result, fighting this huse problem before it poses a worst threat to human physical health is a matter of urgency. The simplest and fastest solution to this problem is to promulgate legislation that prevents dietary companies from magnifying their spread. By doing that, government can lower the impact of extreme reliance on dietary supplement on the society. The policies that encourage employees to do excercise are implemented by employers is also a potential approach to such problems. Last but not least, it would not be completed to not mention the concerted effort of both the government and media in tackling this issue.
In conclusion, the problems and solutions mentioned above would not be all due to time and length limit. The dangerous nature of this issue should need further consideration, more practically and thoroughly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06629834254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64783868915 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549723756906 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1160105805 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.882352941 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163051786608 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497333558077 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402456638839 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103466986499 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337505422913 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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