The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart indicates information about British Emigration to selected destinations over three year between 2004 and 2007. The vertical axis shows the number of British Emigrations. The horizontal axis represents the name of countries. Overall, what stands out from bar chart is that five countries are different from each other about this situation.

To begin with, it is clearly seen that Emigration to Australia began from under 40 thousands in 2004 and rose to just over 50 thousands after 3 year. These figures approximately were similar in New Zealand.

They decreased slightly from 25 thousands to 20 thousands between 2004 and 2007. A number of British Emigration changed sharply between 2004 and 2005 in France from 20 thousands to over 30 thousands. By contrast, in the same years these numbers fluctuated in Spain and then fell considerably after 2005.

On the other hand, looking at USA, these figures were equal in 2004 and 2006. It is interesting point is that a number of visitors were also similar in 2006 and 2007.

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