Your friend is planning to come and visit you next month. Unfortunately you can’t meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Apologise about it.
– Explain the reason why you can’t meet him/her.
– Suggest a different arrangement to meet later.
Dear James,
How're you? I am excited about your your trip to my place on 28th next month. I'd absolutely love to hang out with you after a long time, but unfortunately I've already arranged something else to do on that day. I am extremely sorry for that.
do you remember I told you on call about 2 months back, about my plans to take up a course on Medical Science? The college has organised an entrance exam for the admissions on the same day of your visit. So, I really can't miss this test as it would mean I'll have to wait for another year till the next term commences.
I definitely want to get together with you, in fact let's meet some other day. How about a day later? I know you've got a lot on your plate during your stay here, but I'll give you a call and we can sort out the details over the phone. Maybe we can checkout the new café near the library - I hear their coffee is to die for.
have a great journey! Hope to catch up with you soon
lots of love
Dheeraj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: your
... James, Howre you? I am excited about your your trip to my place on 28th next month. Id...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ur trip to my place on 28th next month. Id absolutely love to hang out with you af...
^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ou after a long time, but unfortunately Ive already arranged something else to do o...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...ay. I am extremely sorry for that. do you remember I told you on call about 2...
^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he same day of your visit. So, I really cant miss this test as it would mean Ill hav...
^^^^
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ly cant miss this test as it would mean Ill have to wait for another year till the ...
^^^
Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ant miss this test as it would mean Ill have to wait for another year till the next ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...ther day. How about a day later? I know youve got a lot on your plate during your sta...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 166, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n your plate during your stay here, but Ill give you a call and we can sort out the...
^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...ear their coffee is to die for. have a great journey! Hope to catch up with ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20725388601 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08696693082 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689119170984 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2546604094 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255155918949 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832355572839 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544318660013 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14445908399 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452510431304 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.