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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram highlights the process by which tomato ketchup is produced and then in which form offered to customers. There are 15 stages in the process, from picking tomatoes by farmer, to enjoying it with dish.
The first step is that the tomatoes are picked and put in basket. Before sending tomatoes to factory, they have been selected only on good ones. After skin, seeds and stalk have been removed from the vegetables, they are then filled into containers. In order to turn they into liquid form, tomatoes have been covered and crushed. After the crushed stage, to make a ketchup, in the liq...
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and then in which form offered to customers.
and then in which forms are offered to customers.
from picking tomatoes by farmer,
from picking tomatoes by farmers,
in the liquid are added such ingredients as sugar
in the liquid some ingredients are added such as sugar
customer buy the tomatoes ketchup bottle and eat it with food.
customers buy the tomatoes ketchup and eat them with food.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Sentence Length SD: 4.427 7.5
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 170 200
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No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.611 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.624 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.156 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.427 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.369 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4