overconsumption in the modern world due to noticeable breakthroughs in machine learning, chemical and medical industries etc.
The author of the statement addresses one of the most urgent subjects of our days – over-consumption in the modern world due to noticeable breakthroughs in machine learning, chemical and medical industries etc. Indeed, there has been no time in the recorded history where the path-breaking achievements in technologies have taken place, except for in the 20th century and the beginning of the 21st century. While some people may be convinced that there is no connection between modernization of lifestyle thanks to innovations and overconsumption, a number of recently published research papers argue that this is in fact a case for developed and a part of developing countries.
Inevitably, it should come no surprise that the briefest reflection on daily life in abovementioned nations reveals there has been considerable growth in ways for exacerbating in consumption – a peak of manufacturing in goods, access to the Internet and consequently to a deal of web-sites and place markets, increasing the level of living and as a result excess of money. Consider, a lucid instance of enhancement in producing goods, China, country where the current production not only takes a part in precipitating of overconsumption, but as well in destroying the climate and environment. Having taken the control over the majority of industries and markets over the worlds, this country inundates the American and European markets with not high-qualities products – from plastic toys and electro mobiles to full-pesticides food.
Furthermore, throughout the last decades by virtue of advances in scientific fields the quality of earnings has changed and so has the type of lifestyle – rushing, depression, devastation have already become an inseparable, integral part of lucrative workplace. Undoubtedly, the present of excess money might be estimated to be a base for overconsumption, however without these negative features of living in a big city, they would have by far less considerable impact. As well, according the latest exploration of international scientists, there are certain genes that provoke people whom own them to do impulsive purchases – from alcohol to new dress on a well-known web-market.
Coming to the subject of the Internet and all benefits that are in our lives owing to it, there a solid need to point up the significant changes which have taken place over the last decades – ability to buy products, goods not only a next-to-door shop, but as well in a huge mall or even more in China directly from a producer. The accessibility and freedom in actions have made their deal – now impulsive purchases can be made over day and night without any restrictions. The formula that contains excess finance, accessibility to markets and products, our genes and desire to get rid of daily lassitude provides an explanation for overconsumption. Presumably while breakouts in different scientific spheres are a prominent player in these alterations, so are our attitude to this, enduring dispositions and indolence to looking for decisions.
In conclusion, having analyzed all highlighted above aspects and given examples, it can be easily estimated that the world doesn’t stay at one spot and changes are ineluctable. While undeniably they do play prominent roles in our lives, so do our attitude to them. There is no need to retreat to the Luddite attitude to them, rather than to embrace a positive posture to innovations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, except for, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 5.05154639175 455% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 26.3917525773 341% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 3.85567010309 493% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2907.0 937.175257732 310% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 550.0 206.0 267% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28545454545 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 3.78020617076 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24326944521 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 127.690721649 237% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550909090909 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 920.7 290.88556701 317% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0909008003 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.6875 76.5299724578 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.375 16.8248392259 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102552020802 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387791411843 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128303811201 0.0603063233224 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629112099186 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108429689668 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 8.37731958763 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 70.7449484536 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 41.2886597938 385% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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