You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter
-explain your position
-apologies and offer to come on another day or later same day
-ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to the appointment that you have invited me.
Firstly, I would like to mention that I am grateful for inviting me for the interview.
However, I am sorry to inform you that I cannot come at time that you are inviting me, because of other extremely important appointment that I have same time.
Therefore, I am keen to come for the interview same day but different hour I am available after 3 pm. Please let me know if the time is suit to your schedule otherwise, I am very happy to meet the other day.
Moreover, I would like to know how long the interview is going to take. And also, is there will be any test during the interview.
I apologize for the inconvenience due to my person.
I look forward to hearing from you.
You faithful,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the inconvenience due to my person. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^
Line 27, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. You faithful, Tomasz Zawadzki
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56953642384 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59032689638 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7456119829 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254677868173 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954383023985 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742436758818 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118549034068 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840218191974 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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