Hi Sir,
I wanted to report an uncalled accident that took place while I was returning from the business trip last night. I hired the car through our company rental on Monday, Thursday 6th 2019 from Chicago city for a two day trip to our client location in St Louis, MN. Since it was weekend I planned to stay back for another day and explore the town. However, while returning I met with a small accident which needs to be informed.
The incident took place around 7:00 PM on the I65 highway. I had a vehicle who was about to the take an exit on Exit no 23, but all of a sudden it again merged back into the highway after a short stint on the exit lane. I assumed it was about to exit as that what it indicated and was off the highway track. I was going at the same speed but as it retracted back to the highway, it caused sudden braking by me and the car behind me bumped into my car from the rear end.
This caused the damaged to the trunk and its locking system. Thankfully no one was injured in this incident. I have the police report and the car driver's insurance details which the company might need for the investigation and repair. Please let me know if any further details are needed from end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ndicated and was off the highway track. I was going at the same speed but as it r...
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...s incident. I have the police report and the car drivers insurance details which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22844827586 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16531664319 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1403786729 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108070144651 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388170728577 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042366355346 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785714050148 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422629080953 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.