Write about the usage of smartphone in Vietnam.
The picture illustrates the usage of smartphone in Vietnam.
There are many figures of every part to show about smartphone.
First of all, as you can see on the picture, the number of phone users is very big. There were 127 million mobile subscribers. This number was 1,5 time as many as Vietnam's population. Next, we had 22 million smartphones users in 2015. It will be predicted to reach 24,6 million in near future.
Besides, there were popular apps for each genre, such as game and social apps. Male users often use game apps, 44%. 51% is social apps for female users. Extant 5 percents is used for others aims.
To be continued, there was a top operating systems includes Android, IOS and windows. The percents of using Android accounted for 53%, it was more than a half. Windows users were the least in three systems. It was only 3%. And, IOS users percents are 43%.
Averagely, we have 3 hours per day on accessing the internet using smartphone.
According to Opera Mediaworks in 2015, Vietnam was top 4 in Asia Pacific country with the fastest growth in smartphone users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, as to, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45064297064 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8260615752 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.1111111111 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5555555556 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127386480428 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041643759922 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909675610562 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930755824357 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125602045808 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.2329268293 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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