Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
deforestation is a major threat to every living organism on Earth. Particularly in this decade, it has been a prominent issue discussed all over the world. I strongly agree with the statement that deforestation could lead to the extinction of living species on this planet.
Firstly, forests are the major source of oxygen, which is the primary requirement for any living being. additionally, forests also help in reducing the air pollution by absorbing carbon dioxide. Continuous deforestation could lead to drastically reduced oxygen content in air and ultimately affecting living beings.
Till now around two thirds of green pastures have been lost since the evolution of mankind. At this point of time, serious measures to restoring the forests should be taken to restore the lost forest and improving the environment.
Furthermore, forests are natural habitat for many different animal species and tribal people. Cutting down these forests could lead to imbalance in the wildlife and can cause the extinction of species. For instance, due to the massive deforestation at Amazon forest hundreds of butterfly species have become extinct. additionally, due to drastic decrease in tree number, Global warming is also growing issue to be considered for the fate of the planet.
Even though, in this era of increasing population and technologies, land required for living and establishing factories are in a huge demand. But this increment necessarily should not affect the overall population. Thus serious measures should be taken to prevent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ious measures should be taken to prevent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, third, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49377593361 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9256908026 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1734386142 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115191562042 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385895742874 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032117458431 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600174227051 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267889197945 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.