You have been invited to attend on interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologise and offer to come on other day or later the some day. Ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing with regard to the interview meeting which I will have with you on Friday at 11am.
I would like to inform you that I will not able to participate in the meeting because at the some time I am going to have cardiology consultation. I have been waiting for three month on it therefore it is vital issue for me.
I would like to apologise for the inconvenience and if it is possible I will be happy to meet with you on any others day or even on Friday but after 2pm.
Could you please send me feature information about duration for this interview as well as pice of details, what kind of meeting it will be. Should I expect any test or other competitions during interview?
Once again, please accept my apologise for my absence.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...rticipate in the meeting because at the some time I am going to have cardiology cons...
^^^^
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... going to have cardiology consultation. I have been waiting for three month on it...
^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ultation. I have been waiting for three month on it therefore it is vital issue for m...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...herefore it is vital issue for me. I would like to apologise for the inconve...
^
Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...I will be happy to meet with you on any others day or even on Friday but after 2pm. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56135777142 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2341161492 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247875824698 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10083290716 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446491109894 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127818056405 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487255893693 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.