Modern children are suffering from those diseases, which were once considered to be meant for the adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevelent among the children. What are it is causes and remedies.
Nowadays, many people prefer to eat fast food because in this current scenario everyone has very less amount of time infants are suffering from some perilous diseases, and also one disease we can consider for adults only. Obesity becomes a chief disease among children. I tend to share my viewpoints and solutions regarding this hurdle before reaching a reasonable summation.
In this contemporary epoch, most of the inhabitants pursuing their jobs with the help of computers but it can make them lethargic because by sitting in the front of the computer for 11 to 12 hours then they not to be able to do any kind of physical activity with their schedule. Moreover, multinational companies are entering nowadays, tasting different kinds of cuisines. Therefore, an abundance of folks prefers to eat junk food because it is convenient and tasty food. For instance, domino is one of the prominent places to get these kinds of cuisines even though this food is not good for their health. Thus, these types of causes are dropping many bad impacts on folk's health.
On the other hand, the majority of people have numerous types of solutions such as consuming regular bases that kind of food which incline the number of obesity between inhabitants and people want that food which is easy to get instead of handmade cuisine. Furthermore, the authorities must be concerned about this problem further it makes some crucial laws to get a reduction in the obesity hurdle.
To recapitulate, few people got habitat of this. Type mentality get easy food where they would not have to do much physical work, however, the inhabitants and authorities must be concerned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
...causes are dropping many bad impacts on folks health. On the other hand, the maj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66748372801 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9509972887 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156469014854 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574530673784 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769923017456 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940519415975 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774994904586 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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