Some companies sponar sport as a way to advertise themselves some people think it is good,while other think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views.

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Some companies sponar sport as a way to advertise themselves some people think it is good,while other think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views.

In this contemporary Era,sports industry is only domain which attracts numerous people due to which most of the companies try to invest money in this sector.so,that they can easily flourish their market at the root level of society, Although, certain section of society opine that it is good for company to sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves.whilst, other other in the view It is not beneficial for them.However,this is a will elucidate both the prospective in upcoming paragraph.

To embark with,there are multiple reason why people think it is not indeed to sponsor of sports for advertisement purpose. First of all, as most of the people are highly educated due to the advancement of Technology and they are well aware of that what is beneficial for them or not? So, there is no requirement of investing money in sports industry, which always give the worthless result unless, it get can providing huge amount of profit, It will create a new cause which will become difficult to neutralize in future time. Furthermore, another source through which companies can grab a huge profit that is by increasing "quality" Of product people only emphasis on the quality even if,the quantity is less therefore,spending money on the quality of product can give more wrathful result as compare to advertise themselves.

I would like to ad some more To support my other point of view which is in the favour of advertisement Must give better result.as most of the people are very occupied in their daily routine work and hardly have one or two hour for exploring about new companies.But, if there is a proper advertisement through sport industry then there can get information at time of sports competition of most effective way to flourish their market at the root level of a society.However, if a person get attracted towards add then,the possibility of purchasing a product is increases. in addition to this,it provide opportunity to expand their business throughout the world therefore,it is no need to regret the advertisement to other sources.

To conclude,the essay has explained both the perspective with one relevant example. However, there is an essential need for companies to focus on quality of product even through,quantity compromises But,at the same time they are also get attracted with advertise themselves

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17585301837 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24763034719 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.782715109 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.111111111 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.3333333333 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20171261514 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789177107468 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549374960016 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119052773098 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319794215876 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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