The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of different types of turtles in India over a period of 32 years spanning from 1980 to 2012.
Overall, olive ridley turtles have the highest population among all whereas leatherback turtles have the lowest. green turtles and other species take the middle spots with a moderate population.
From 1980 to 1998, olive ridley turtles have increased from 100 to around 130. Then the line moves along in a more fluctuated manner and it stopped at about 125 in 2012. green turtles showed a slight increase during early years (1982). Afterwards, the number started decreasing in 1988. even though the numbers moved up and downs till 2000, it moved in a more stable manner and finally stopped at about 90 in 2012. The line representing other species shows a more consistent data indicating that the number never falls below 95.
However, even though there was an increase in leatherback turtles till 1987, the population significantly decreased in the following years. there was a year or two where it did show a slight increase. But ultimately, it continued dropping and moved to just above 50 in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... spots with a moderate population. From 1980 to 1998, olive ridley turtles ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06282722513 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5421099215 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8934825408 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187454447481 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065956530915 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558016387774 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128017796098 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606142268863 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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