you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
write a letter to your manager. in your letter
.explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
.say how your work could be done while you are away
.ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Manish,
I hope this letter finds you in a sound state. I anticipate that you're noticing my track record with respect to performance. I would like to share my thought and I probably want your complete support regarding the same.
As you already know about my work and with that jovialness I would like to ask you that I desperately want to go to our head office in Jerusalem and extend my services there too to prove myself and explore the country alongside. I am expecting to go with my parents for a period of six months as they never been to any foreign country till now.
Whilst I am away from the home branch I will finish the pending work when i get back here. I work overtime if required and would definitely whole work, I can assure you that.
It's the time that I can take my parents somewhere, so that, they get a chance to visit a city that's rich in culture and heritage aspects. No matter which country i chose this particular state as our head office is located there.
I am waiting for your positive response and hopefully, as I work as a foreign worker there I'm expecting accommodation facilities are provided so that my family won't suffer after going there. Kindly treat this as a personal assignment and help me in persuading through this.
Your's sincerely,
Sukumar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manish, I hope this letter finds you in a sound ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...you in a sound state. I anticipate that youre noticing my track record with respect t...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ack record with respect to performance. I would like to share my thought and I pr...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur complete support regarding the same. As you already know about my work and wi...
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Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...ents for a period of six months as they never been to any foreign country till now. Whi...
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Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nch I will finish the pending work when i get back here. I work overtime if requi...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e work, I can assure you that. Its the time that I can take my parents som...
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Line 17, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...that, they get a chance to visit a city thats rich in culture and heritage aspects. N...
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Line 17, column 163, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ritage aspects. No matter which country i chose this particular state as our head...
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Line 17, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te as our head office is located there. I am waiting for your positive response ...
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Line 19, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ly, as I work as a foreign worker there Im expecting accommodation facilities are ...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g through this. Yours sincerely, Sukumar.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6452991453 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53555331408 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5227463951 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273397056269 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902812175037 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593433727186 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133651654276 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525634271815 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.