In this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings have been looking for ways to enhance their lifestyle's quality. In this respect, sports are most significant importance in forming individuals' lifestyle. Some people believe playing sports can teach people lessons about life. However, some others have an opposite point of view. In my vantage point, playing sports play a prominent role in teaching people about life. In what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective.
First, it is significant to be mentioned hat, playing sports teach people properly cooperation, which leads them to have effective communication with other persons in their real life. Put it in other words, the most important factor for playing sport in teams is having strong communication and cooperation skills. Which of these, help individuals to enhance their communication skill in their real lives. For example, playing basketball every day fortify the players' social spirit, and thus they learn to cooperate with others. Results of an experiment conducted in my country underscore the fact that, sport team members are more sociable and cooperative persons in their workplace and team working.
Another reason which deserves some attention here is that, playing sports encourage people to kept practicing and persisting until they reach their goal. To be more specific, playing sports, especially playing as a team, give the team members competetive environment that only with constant practicing they attain their goals, This circumstance is pretty similar to real world and life.
Last but not the least, every failure is a prerequisite for an achievement, so loosing in sports can teach people this crucial lesson about life. As a matter of fact, sports give the players hope for trying again and again in order to win. And loosing in playing does not mean ending and giving up.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that, playing sports can teach lessons about life. Sports not only teach cooperation, but also help people to kept practice and do not loose their hope.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...help people to kept practice and do not loose their hope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25147928994 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65215028306 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3948804341 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6111111111 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339855690939 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124110472261 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135069256483 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22114858726 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778661077719 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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