Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.
Some people say that they have contributed enough to their country while the others stand against this idea and believe, there are more crucial responsibilities for residents of a country than just paying their taxes. I personally believe people can do more than just paying part of their revenoue to the government.
The most important aspect of a country is its economy. Wealthy countries have showned to be more developed than the poor ones. This may explain why so many people get this idea that they only need to support their country financially so their country can use and invest their money in more crucial and demanding areas.
Yet there are other groups of people who take issue with this belief and they strongly suggest that people can contribute to their society in many more effective ways. They believe that individuals are the driving force of a community's growth and they should be seen more than a tax paying machine. For instance, people themselves can help the government in order to preserve the environment by producing less sewage or they can use public transportation to contribute to the conservation of ari rather than being indifferent to these affairs and having this assumption that the only one who is incharge of a better air quality is the government and they can't play a role.
To conclude, it may seem that a financial contribution to our country is very crucial in order to have a more advanced country. However, members of a society can help their government in other aspects as they are the real power of a country. Therefore, people in their society must be more productive than that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... air quality is the government and they cant play a role. To conclude, it may seem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86330935252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.653255064 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8972985533 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3564927379 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151476958039 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968382072088 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244214789102 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100843184537 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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