the cycle of water from rainfall to usable wate
This diagram shows the cycle of water from rainfall to usable water. Overall, there are three sources of water supply to household: water treatment plant, rainwater tank and wastewater treatment plant.
First, the rain falls down then the precipitation fills the rainwater tank in a house. After raining, the water in tank can easily be used in households. The rain also fill a dam which functions as another water source. Water from the dam then piped to the water treatment plant. It needs several process to finally use as drinking water and streamed to households.
The next water source is recycled water. Wastewater from houses is located in particular place named wastewater treatment plant processing some treated steps to make the wastewater reusable. Finally, this recycled water can be streamed back to households and consumed. Recycle process result excess treated water which then piped to the river. Underground, there are also pipes which use for storm water treatment and it also are piped to the river.
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The rain also fill a dam
The rain also fills a dam
Water from the dam then piped to the water treatment plant.
Water from the dam then is piped to the water treatment plant.
Recycle process result excess treated water which then piped to the river.
Recycle process results in excess treated water which then is piped to the river.
Underground, there are also pipes which use for storm water treatment and it also are piped to the river
On the underground, there are also pipes which are used for storm water treatment and also are piped to the river
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