It is better to finish a project completely and then do another project than do two or more projects at the same time?
In the present day and life, projects that people did have increased a lot. This phenomenon causes a general debate about which way will be better for a person to finish their projects. The quiet a few people prefer to finish two or more projects simultaneously; however, in my perspective, it will be much better for people to complete the assignments one by one than do them together.
First of all, people will have time to make an exquisite project by doing two or more projects one by one. To be specific, people can only do one project in a particular period, thus, they can concentrate on doing one project, which means they can make an elaborate assignment as much as possible. Moreover, when the project is looked at by others, people can get really good feedback from others. For instance, during the last semester, I had to finish two posters in the mid-term. One of them was given by my Literature professor, and the other was given by my economics professor. I did them one by one. Eventually, I got really good grades and feedback from my professors. My literature teacher told me that the beautiful pictures that I drew without doing any other things in two days had completely amazed her.
Furthermore, if people complete an assignment and then do another project, they won’t feel tired and everything will in order. On the one hand, when people do different things together, they will be very busy, and their life will in a mess, thus, everything around them will be uncontrolled. For example, my mom is a manager at a tea company. Once a time, she had to do different projects. One of them would be used to show the boss, and the other one would be used to show other employees during the meeting. She did two PowerPoint present at the same time to save her time; however, she almost exhausted during that period. What’s more, her eating time became irregular and I thought it was not good for her health.
All in all, doing different projects one by one will be a good decision for people to make, and they can get a lot of benefits such as they can make a high quality of the project and they won't have a health problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ought it was not good for her health. All in all, someone think there will be ...
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Suggestion: thinks
...or her health. All in all, someone think there will be some advantages of doing ...
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Suggestion:
... people's life will become easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69362745098 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61943534237 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5967268557 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1904761905 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350618305451 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114320051823 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110434797879 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245932709445 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246173017494 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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