It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
There are various kinds of relationships can be find in our day to day life. But amoung them most of then are not last long for long time. We will loose their grip by time passes. Personally, I believe that speaking truth is not important to have good relationship between people. I feel this way for two main resons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, speaking truth might hurt some one, because we humans, likes to get compliments all the time even though we are not sutable to deserve it. My own experions is a compelling example of this. Last month I went for my friend's wedding. There I met my old school friend and she asked me that does her hair looks good. I told her that, her hair style is not looking good and not matches with the frock. She didn't show any anger to me, but I realized that she is quite unhappy about what I say. Therefor I felt so uncomfertable to stay with her in that wedding. If I just lie to her and tlod that her hari looks perfect and nicely matches with the frock. I would have enjoyed that wedding ceromony.
Secondly, By telling small lies we can encourage people. We might do not think that small lie will do a huge faver to some one. For instant, One day my friend told me that he like to participate in a marathon. But he was quite doubt about his ability to partcipate in a marathon. He asked me whther he will win in this.Though I new that he want even finish the marathon, I replied him that surely he will win this. Because of it he participated in that. As I thought he couldn't finish it but he got a certificate for participation. If I didn't lie, he wouldn't have get that certificate.
In conclution, I strongly believe that telling truth is not important to have a better relationship. This is because telling truth might can hurt people and lieing can motivate people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...re not last long for long time. We will loose their grip by time passes. Personally, ...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...First of all, speaking truth might hurt some one, because we humans, likes to get compli...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'look'?
Suggestion: look
...end and she asked me that does her hair looks good. I told her that, her hair style i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ood and not matches with the frock. She didnt show any anger to me, but I realized th...
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Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... that small lie will do a huge faver to some one. For instant, One day my friend told me...
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Suggestion: Though
... He asked me whther he will win in this.Though I new that he want even finish the mara...
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Message: Did you mean 'knew' (past of "to know")?
Suggestion: knew
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...plied him that surely he will win this. Because of it he participated in that. As I th...
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...urely he will win this. Because of it he participated in that. As I thought he co...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...pation. If I didnt lie, he wouldnt have get that certificate. In conclution, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39534883721 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51423576659 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526162790698 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3297761913 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0487077198338 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0144065971237 0.076458572812 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271279038245 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0289129589606 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0071544203573 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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