Dear sir,
I am writing to address the issue with the LaserHP Samsung printer which I had bought from your shop two days ago, on Nov 7th.
The machine is malfunctioning and the page is jammed causing ink to blurr. I have read user manual thoroughly and tried many different papers, but the problem is still persisting. Also a strange voice is coming from the printer and an error message flashed endlessly.
This has affected my work as a a freelance poster designer badly as I have to give hardcopies to my customers. I had to drive an hour to market downtown and had to wait another hour to get the designs printed from a small stationary shop which is obviously inconvenient.
The machine is brand new and within the warranty period. I can demand for it's maintenance. However, due to urgency it would be appreciated if you get it replaced as I have a meeting with my client this weekend. I could drive to your shop and return this faulty printer today or tomorrow in exchange of a new one.
Waiting for your positive reply.
Thank you
Yours sincerely
Chhavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to address the issue with t...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e read user manual thoroughly and tried many different papers, but the problem is still persis...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s, but the problem is still persisting. Also a strange voice is coming from the prin...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...lessly. This has affected my work as a a freelance poster designer badly as I ha...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lessly. This has affected my work as a a freelance poster designer badly as I ...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...lessly. This has affected my work as a a freelance poster designer badly as I ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65968586387 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60249978405 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0616068311 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253670025711 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797095022337 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633280170587 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115594902206 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042107113573 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.