Some people say that there is no need to give international aid by governments as they already have unemployment and homeless in their own country.
How far do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint
It has been argued that it is unnecessary for governments to provide aid to other countries when they are facing unemployment and homelessness in their own countries. Although there are some concerns in this action, I am of the opinion that many underdeveloped countries are in major dilemma and require international funds to survive.
There are a number of issues associated with providing international funds to other countries. First of all, some people could be unemployed and homeless due to the governments not allocating the budget on providing opportunities. Thus, it would be difficult for them to survive, especially for old people in tough conditions. In addition, the governments not allocating funds in their own country could lead themselves to lack of resources. This would result in many people migrating when there would be lack of opportunities.
However, there are many countries which are facing major problems nowadays require international aid to survive. People in underdeveloped and developing countries are facing poverty and scarcity of food and water. African people living in countries where there is corruption such as Somalia and Nigeria require a lot of attention towards them for their survival. In addition, thousands of African people are facing life-threatening diseases and deadly viruses such as Ebola and Dengue which would eventually cause to die if proper treatments are not given. Seeing that those people rely only on international aid, thus it is essential to fund them.
In conclusion, while providing financial assistance to other countries may cause unemployment and homelessness in funds provider countries, I believe it is better to help people of countries who rely only on international aid.
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- Some people say that there is no need to give international aid by governments as they already have unemployment and homeless in their own country.How far do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dieing', 'dying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dieing; dying
...and Dengue which would eventually cause to die if proper treatments are not given. See...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17337130937 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7116380354 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201261354052 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814281059456 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493708121583 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139312002171 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430903805355 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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