You have heard that the local authority is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of your town. You do not agree with decision because there are already a lot of shops.Write a letter to the planning department.In your letter-Say why you are writi

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You have heard that the local authority is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of your town. You do not agree with decision because there are already a lot of shops.
Write a letter to the planning department.
In your letter
-Say why you are writing
-Give reasons for your objections
-Explain what you think would be a better alternative

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter regarding the news of building a new shopping mall in the centre of our town.

I think authority should think twice before making this mall in the centre of town. There are already so many shops of everything. All the things we need in day to day basis are readily available here.

Other then that there are many fashion outlets, DIY, Furniture and home shopping outlets, so we don’t want any other shops in this area. As the number of the shops increases, there will be more crowed coming to this over populated area. More crowed means more noise, traffi...

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