Some people think genetic engineering is an iconic research in modern society and could upgrade the life of quality for people. Others recognize this would be a risk for human. I believe genetic engineering will benefits people's life outweighs the risk.
First and foremost, genetic engineering will have a huge chance to understand human's body system more than ever before. Not just cope varies disease and illness but can provide solution to avoid the that for all the human. Furthermore, we can figure the positive or negative gene before giving birth so change it to cut the risk in earliest period. For example, some gene cannot harm the parents but it will cause some disease for new born baby, people can have better and quality life if the scientist help doctor to do the genetic manipulation. Another significant reason related to the topic is that the the genetic engineering can grow better crops on the earth not only feed the people who do not have enough food but also produce the high quality agriculture results.
It is true for some people to argue genetic engineering could harm human' life. There are many risks that we still do not have knowledge base on human's body running and working so manipulate it will lead us to the unknown and uncontrolled way. For instance, many movies shows the monsters were created by human lab, even some hero is a sort of potential danger.
In conclusion, science improvement represent improved society, encourage scientist to explorer more such as genetic engineering is the way to make better place for the human life. The only concern is we can control it before we change it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'iconic research'.
Suggestion: iconic research
...ome people think genetic engineering is an iconic research in modern society and could upgrade the...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...man. I believe genetic engineering will benefits peoples life outweighs the risk. Fir...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the earliest'.
Suggestion: in the earliest
...ving birth so change it to cut the risk in earliest period. For example, some gene cannot h...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ant reason related to the topic is that the the genetic engineering can grow better cro...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ant reason related to the topic is that the the genetic engineering can grow better cro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87813620072 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47743636328 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1818622278 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227154360016 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937105467526 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772687635263 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157049039266 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764897703276 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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