Nowadays, education plays more crucial role to survive in life and due to high competition education level is also increased as compared to past.However , some people think that during high school programs students should do some social and educational service such as , working for charity or teaching sports and some educational subject to younger children.I partially agree with this statement because of some valid reasons.
First of all, to provide some social and educational service for society not only students can improve their internal abilities but it can also helpful for overall society.Due to working for a charity , students can learn valuable lesson of life and this virtues can helpful to survive in life. Furthermore if high school students teach sports and some educational subject to poor adolescent then it can helpful for the young children to survive in life .For this reason literacy rate is also higher I society and if more and more students are educated then indirectly economy of that country can also increase. That's why unpaid community service should not only helpful for the high school students but it also useful for overall society.Hence, unpaid community service is compulsory to some extent.
On the negative side, in high school the level of subject is also very tought, so students need more concentration and hard work I their study . If student do some social work in their working hours then it can affect the overall performance in their academic. Furthermore, in high school because of hectic schedule student do not get appropriate time for social services. Moreover,high school education is main part for the students to choose their career because after high school they get admission in the field in which they are interested. So this type of social services can also affect the performance in students academics.
In conclusion, students must have to do some unpaid social activities during their high school education. However, it is also essential to concentrate eqally in their study because after high school they have to chance to take admission in the reputed college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19241982507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68810435815 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454810495627 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.801180171 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.909090909 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308876763308 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13904459026 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901198408272 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199947641946 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651429303238 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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