The number of Japanese tourist going to abroad from 1985 to 1995, and the proportion of Japanese traveler coming to Australia, between 1985 and 1994.
The bar chart illustrates the number of Japanese tourist going to abroad from 1985 to 1995, and the line graph shows the proportion of Japanese traveler coming to Australia, between 1985 and 1994.
It is clear that, after the number of Japanese tourist reached a peak, this figure decline slightly, then increased significantly over the whole period. It can also be seen that the percentage of Japanese tourist coming to Australia increase significantly but the end of period decreased slightly.
In 1985 the Japanese tourist travelling abroad stood at just below 6 million people. While this figure reached a high of approximately 11 million travelers in the first 5 years, while in 1991 it saw a slight fall to 10 million tourist. Then, there was a dramatic growth until the end of period, to just below 16 million people. Overall, if compared to the year of 1985-1990, in the period 1991 to 1995, the rate saw slightly lower than the first five period.
The percentage Japanese tourist coming to Australia stood at 2%. While this figure peaked at 6% in over 8 years. Between 1985 and 1994. There was a small decline to 6% in 1994. Overall, in the 1985-1988, the percentage of Japanese tourist going to Australia showed slightly more people than 1989-1994.
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this figure decline slightly
this figure declines slightly
the percentage of Japanese tourist coming to Australia increase significantly
the percentage of ... increases significantly
While this figure reached a high of approximately 11 million travelers in the first 5 years, while in 1991 it saw a slight fall to 10 million tourist.
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the percentage of Japanese tourist going to Australia showed slightly more people than 1989-1994.
the percentage of Japanese tourists going to Australia showed slightly more people than that in 1989-1994.
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